adam-p89's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Dark Warrior 2]

This has Potential!

You're character designs are really awesome, your music choice is great and your lighting effects are very interesting indeed. Might I suggest a couple of things to improve upon?
1)Facial Expressions - It looks a little strange to see a character yell FUCK YOU, I HAVE A GUN! and have such a neutral face. All you have to do is make another layer and use that to make different facial expressions, you don't even have to re-draw the whole character to achieve this effect easily
2)Animation - Your character seemed to be a little static and still like. Try to seperate the body parts on different layers, you've started to work on that but there is room for improvement, if you are willing. You might also want to use different camera angles, and draw your characters from different views, this helps in the animation department as well.
Other than that, you have cool characters and a nice story, although voice acting would be nice. Good luck on your future endeavours!

Adam

Quelledal responds:

Thank you for the advice, it's nice for somebody to review a movie with some constructive criticism, not just spouting out a bunch of insults to the author :)

[Stoners Ep. 10]

hahaha

It's hilarious cuz stuff like that happened to me all summer! Nice bong, it looked 3D! Keep making these, they're great!

Adam

[Area K.O. Episode VI]

great!

Great movie! I've seen all the episodes, starting with episode 5, your talent started to kick in and the episodes got really fun. I loved this episode and I love the story and the "broken hero" kind of character and the mentioning of the "legends" that is all really cool. Keep making the episodes!

Adam

[Day Dreaming (tLB)]

WOW

YOU ARE AMAZING!! Seriously you rule!!

Adam

[Strawberry's Lucky Day]

hahahahaha

Hilarious!! I love your movies!!

Adam

[The Bus Stop]

Awesome

Super professional! Your characters have eyes too! And smooth animation! You and IXIKnoxIXI are the clay kings of the portal, in my opinion. That was funny and good stuff, don't let anybody else tell you anything else. Keep up the good work!

Adam

toxicbomb responds:

Thanks Adam! I really enjoy it when people tell me that! It does help!! Thanks for reviewing!

[NG Series War]

AWESOME!

I liked the whole feel of this movie, the action was swirling and blurred and smoothe! You are awesome at flash for a second movie, my early movies were horrible in comparison! You have to get someone to burn you flash or you can download it off Kazaa and crack it, or you can buy it, but do one of those 3! Great work!

Adam

[The Butterfly Effect]

Awesome!

Nice graphics, original content, what else can I say?

Adam