adam-p89's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Project X Episode 2]

excellent episode!

Really excellent, a great sequel! You have the same taste in music as me hehe (guess we both know what is fitting for dramatic scenes :P) I liked how the main character didn't know what was going on and how we don't know who to trust, Marco or the guy in the robe. Great work! All I can suggest is you have voice acting in the next one, it will make this that much more professional looking, great job though! (yup this is the guy who made Lonesoul and is working on Lonesoul 2 now) But what's good is that our series' are going in opposite directions, whereas our first episodes were similar the other two are way different, oh well keep watching the portal for it is 50 times better than episode one and 50 times more professional! It should be done soon, I wanna put special features though, takes time..anyway bye, keep at it!

Adam

[Detective Frofrog]

A STRAIGHT FLUSH OF 10s!!

That's the first movie I've seen deserving of all 10s! So much originality, so much style, and beautiful animation! I loved it all! The umbrella was a great idea! I loved the interactive preloader with all the "making of" information, I love to see that in DVDs and you have brought it here! I loved it! It was really interesting to read, and I really loved the style. You have good jazz skills as well, I loved the soundtrack! Just excellent everything, I don't know what else to say!! Really great work!

Adam

[Madness Redeemer]

MADNESS...nuff said! (JESUS RULES!!)

That was amazing, it's totally your own style! The amount of layers boggles my mind! Curious, can you tell me how many you used exactly? I really loved that! Thanks for making it!

Adam

Krinkels responds:

Im not sure, and im not going back to count. but there were 11 scenes, not including the preloader, and each scene had 12-30 layers in it.

[Rival Part 1]

excellent!!

Wow.. a stick movie with style..I thought I'd never see the day...Really good work! I loved the effects when the camera spun around the main character, and the action scenes were smooth and beautiful, by far one of the best stick movies I have ever seen.. But still it would be that much better if you totally got away from sticks, it seems you are at that stage where you can go on, but u like this style, so do what you want, I still loved it, excellent work

Adam

[Mariovayne: Dig]

haha mariovayne!

That's something original! I'm a huge mudvayne fan, and this was great, true to the original dig video in many ways. You should make the not falling video, but it would be so much better if you actually drew the characters instead of using sprites, I can picture it..could be great! Nice work with syncing, nice and original, good job!

Adam

A17roolz responds:

Yeah, I was considering that actually... Thanks for the idea I might use it.

[shadow warriors]

shadow warriors....cool...*amused face*

That was awesome! I usually dont give much higher than a 7 to trailers or tests but this was deserving. Excellent artwork, and the animation was spectacular in the fight scenes in particular. I loved that, really I cant wait to see the next installment! Haha it was cool how u used the matrix footage at the end. Really nice work tho, keep it up!

Adam

[Charakter Movie 5]

excellent!

WOW, Lawrence, you sure are developping as an animator, that much is really clear! I've seen all of your movies and I think this one was the best one yet. That song was excellent, and fit the movie perfectly, what was it by the way? It was real DBZ-like, not at all Stick-like, 2 bonuses! The animation was really smooth, really stylish, perhaps even mindblowing at some points! You have taken the DBZ style and made it your own, that was well done too.

If you want some advice, here is what I can suggest:
-when you draw the heads, try and make them less wide, so they don't end up looking overly fat
-look at your hand. See the way the fingers are, that will help you to get a feeling for the proper lengths of fingers.
-It looks like you were attempting to make the characters really big to emphasize their power. Just know, you don't have to do this too much, study a picture of a muscle-man, this will show you the proper formation of muscles and the proportionality of it all. There are some easy to find tutorials on the internet that will teach you the basics of proportionality. I think that is what you need to focus on right now.
-your lighting effects were great, focus more on shadows and camera angles

Hope this helps, keep up the good work!

Adam

[*Out Of This World 1*]

*TEAR* WOW!!!

Wow wow wow wow!! You are the master of serious flash! I bow down to you!! You are my idol, that movie was amazing!!! You scared the crap out of me at parts and managed to make it real sci-fi-ish and have an ambience and style all it's own, I really loved that! and I mean REALLY! That was sooo great!! I was so sad when it was over, you have to make the second one, HAVE TO!! That was so great thanks so much for that high quality piece of work!!

Adam

[GIRI]

WOWOWOWOW!!

That was soooo excellent! Your animation was great, it was (to my knowledge) historically acurate, and your art was really grate. No wait, your animation was amazing! I loved it, loved it all! I crave more! hehe :P really great job!

Adam

[Metroid: Project K]

YOU SHOULD HAVE WON!

That was really excellent, and all original art, I really enjoyed that! I am a big metroid fan, and was playing metroid prime a little while ago, and you captured the metroid universe in this, IMHO. But really great job!

Adam